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Johnathan Reid's avatar

You build the world so effectively and the tension just keeps mounting - I was gripped! The post-partum pain, smells and emotions were spot-on. The wraith-like descriptions in the darkness reminded me of Aragorn summoning the Army of the Dead. Great stuff!

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maryh10000's avatar

Yes! It's so rare for someone to write the post birth mother and newborn baby in a believable manner. I love this. I was terrified you'd have her sacrifice the baby. And Quill!

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