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E.B. Howard's avatar

This is an *impressive* amount of character development for the length of the story. Nicely done. I wasn't expecting to start this morning with so much to wrestle with either, but wow, this was an experience.

Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

This was good. This was so good.

Bridget Riley's avatar

Thank you, Michael!!

Jennifer Handy's avatar

Just beautifully written, Bridget.

I’m sincerely choked-up. 🙏🏻

Bridget Riley's avatar

Thank you so much!

Cole Noble's avatar

Damned onion ninjas. This was masterfully done.