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Michael S. Atkinson's avatar

Oh thank heaven.

This is a phenomenally well written action scene; I could practically hear the sound of the wind and objects and everything. You could give lessons on Marvel on pacing.

Also, because FINALLY:

THE SHIP. THE SHIP. THE SHIP HAS SAILED. Touched bows, even.

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Jean Marie Bauhaus's avatar

Phew!

Also, you were so sly with the long-awaited kiss that I almost missed it.

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