This is a phenomenally well written action scene; I could practically hear the sound of the wind and objects and everything. You could give lessons on Marvel on pacing.
Also, because FINALLY:
THE SHIP. THE SHIP. THE SHIP HAS SAILED. Touched bows, even.
I've got a feeling that we won't be seeing Ernest again. He finally got to prove that he was brave. I think that was what was going on with him, right? Also, so excited to see that the ship has sailed!
Oh thank heaven.
This is a phenomenally well written action scene; I could practically hear the sound of the wind and objects and everything. You could give lessons on Marvel on pacing.
Also, because FINALLY:
THE SHIP. THE SHIP. THE SHIP HAS SAILED. Touched bows, even.
Thank you so much, Michael!! This made me laugh out loud. 😂
Phew!
Also, you were so sly with the long-awaited kiss that I almost missed it.
The way I described the kissing scene to my sister was “not showing, but also not really telling either” 😂
Yeah it took me a second read through (I think I got to, "not the first time" and had to go back) but 10/10 honestly
This is a jam packed chapter
Such a better use of my time than folding laundry!
What a relief on so many levels. I wanted to give Brian the biggest hug. And the ship!!! So good.
I’m always happy to be a means of laundry procrastination!
I loved these last few chapters… I’m glad Brian is okay now 🥹
Thank you so much, James!
Absolutely gripping! Also, the ship has finally sailed!!!
I've got a feeling that we won't be seeing Ernest again. He finally got to prove that he was brave. I think that was what was going on with him, right? Also, so excited to see that the ship has sailed!
Oh goodness. You had me on the edge of my seat. And yay for the ship lol
This chapter was perfect! So satisfying!
Brilliant, mind-boggling
Thank you so much, Stephanie!