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This was so intriguing! And your language, as always, is so finely wrought. Excellent!

I visited Dubrovnik a few summers ago. It was enchanting but extremely hot. I still made my family walk the wall because that’s the kind of mom I am! 😆 I would definitely go back.

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Thank you so much, Garen! I know so little about Croatia, but the more I learn the more I want to visit!

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a superb driving pace!

for a moment i was expecting some poison to find its way into the wine!

i have been to croatia! Split was somewhat overwhelmed with tourists but had a lot of amazing architecture and history. we stayed at Vis which was delightful! we went to zadar only for the airport because i fell over and broke my arm so we couldn't travel back over land by train as planned.

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Thank you so much, Nick! Oh no, I’m so sorry about your broken arm! I guess it’s memorable, at least, although not in the way you want a vacation to be!

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oh yes very memorable! the doctor in Split was hilarious. he was playing "everybody hurts" by REM and "I hurt myself today" by NIN while he was explaining my XRAYs etc. funny guy! great medical treatment and virtually free despite brexit.

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Ok, so …. I know it’s a flash fiction, but dang, more would be awesome, please and thank you!

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Oh, thank you, Leanne!

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I love this take on a planetarium.

There's a lot of intrigue in this and a lot of beauty too.

Well done.

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Thank you so much, Jennifer!

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Excellent Bridget. Well told and the setting was perfectly described. I truly love historical fiction, and this one really fit the bill. Thanks for sharing. - Jim

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Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Jim!

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