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Joshua Conner's avatar

First time in a while that I read as fast. Exciting read!

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Adrienne Morris's avatar

OMG. 😱

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Caitriana NicNeacail's avatar

Terrifyingly effective!

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Pennie R. S. Nelson's avatar

Wow, it's really interesting the way you wrote this one. I like it.

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Bridget Riley's avatar

Thank you so much! I based the meter and rhyme scheme on "Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening" by Robert Frost.

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Pennie R. S. Nelson's avatar

I'll have to check that out, thank you.

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